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The Red Juice by ~poeticider:iconpoeticider:

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The Red Juice

The trees sway and the streams flow with their clear red waters
And the grasses breathe the red, red air
That fresh smell, so vivid and fulfilled
The birds are chanting that old, old song
And the rodents sing with happy, happy faces
The red water streaming down their faces
And the late Barry Badger is cremated under a great red flame-
We’re here to help.
We’re always here to help.
Well the red juice is quite common now,
The trees with their happy red drowning leaves
The smothered forest animals with their pleased faces
The streams grow into great, proud rivers,
And I close my eyes; and I dream.
©2009 ~poeticider
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Author's Comments

good ol barry badger.

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=sleyf Jun 20, 2009, 2:27:31 AM
I'm slightly afraid! But you know have you ever watched Saladfingers :D

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Darn it...like a sock!
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~Only-half-functional Jun 20, 2009, 10:22:45 AM
Killing the trees and critters! Mesa likes, included the added disturbing factor it has!

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Its funny how so much depends on so little....

If life is a dream, best dream the waking.
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~poeticider Jun 22, 2009, 1:31:15 PM
yeh its meant to be disturbing...i wrote this ages ago so i cant really remeber how it came about...

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~poeticider Jun 22, 2009, 1:34:12 PM
yep...hmmm a lil gothic mebbe ^^

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~Lariekoek Jun 22, 2009, 2:44:12 PM
Wow, I don't really get it (but that's not necessary) but I love it! It's beautiful! :O

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=sleyf Jun 23, 2009, 1:50:53 AM
Yep it is, sort of

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Spare a crumb. Please be kind and visit my gallery.

"A desperate man will believe in anything, if it means he can live forever."
-Zantair-

Darn it...like a sock!
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~Semeni Jun 23, 2009, 9:03:55 AM
tbh Im slightly confused... but its good :D

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~poeticider Jun 23, 2009, 2:04:48 PM
well thats better than nothing i guess....and well its meant to be weird so heh..

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~poeticider Jun 23, 2009, 2:18:36 PM
wow thank you! thats a really nice thing to say!

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